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Goku vs Freezer by ShaoGraph

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A couple of the staff members came together and have an answer. Right now, your render is placed very well. However, the problem is mainly the background. To one, it is bland, to another is the lack of depth and merging but KHPlanet do agree that the text needs some and that it may benefit better from a different front. That is not to say that this signature is terrible so please do not be discouraged from this critique. KHPlanet still like your work and hopefully, you can show the rest of the members your graphics on our site too. KHPlanet hopes that you continue to improve. :)
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ShaoGraph Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
How is it done? Thank you!
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ShaoGraph Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you for your review.
I had thought about doing a version 2 of this signature because I thought to (perhaps) of C4D in the background to try something better.
Regarding the typography, I thought the travailer much because, I admit, here it is a little sloppy.
I'll let you know when I would replace it with another version. I must find the time to do it.
Thank you again!
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ShaoGraph Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I change ! =) Now ?
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KHPlanet Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Yes. That is better. There is no blurriness on the right bottom part of the signature like the previous version and the font looks better. Want to go back and change the rating the site won't let us. Is now a four star.
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